Dizzy from all this spinning,
In what shape will I be tomorrow?
Submitting, turning, changing,
Transformed by every sorrow.
Fingers that press my flesh so hard
I sob and wail and moan,
Loving hands that love so much
They would never leave me alone.
He shows me what he’s done with me,
The after and the ‘fore,
Delighted, I cry out to him,
“Spin me even more!”
Dizzy from all this spinning,
Too hard, too tough, too real,
But changing towards the beautiful
On this patient potter’s wheel.
Beautiful and delightful! I am dizzy too! I love the reminder, Linnea, thank you so much!
You are welcome, Deirdre. So glad you enjoyed it.
Nice – so much movement to stay in place.
Yes, a great deal of movement.
I know this probably isn’t the meaning, but I got out of it that it was a man who beat a woman (spinning her emotions) one day he was rough then he’s turn around and love her, and through the whole process he leaves her dizzy as to what he will do the next day. And through all this your trying to mold him. Is my version crazy or what or can you see it?
Based on your life experiences, Lori, I can see how you read it this way and I am very sorry. No, this is about the Master Potter, God, and the way he refines us through our experiences. For instance, because of your horrific experiences, you can reach out to others and help to make a lot of beautiful changes.
When variables in life cause us to fret, feel bad, sad, anxious and/or etc., we spin out of control, but thank God for “time.” The spinning gets past us, right?
Great poem,
Thank you, Cherrye.
It’s interesting how interpretation of this poem is based on the reader’s own life experiences. I thought it was about life on this spinning world, sometimes good and sometimes bad, but always changing.
Once again you’ve touched many people.
Thank you, Sandra. It is indeed interesting. I saw only one interpretation but am certainly open to others.
I am “spinning” and this is perfect for my heart and soul. Thank you Linnea…I am printing and will read and reread…beautiful
Thank you, anonymous. I have a couple of those so I’m not sure which one you are.
It’s humbling to know that from the same lump might come a Ming vase or a clay pigeon — or anything in between.
And perhaps even more humbling to know that the pigeon might be used for the grander purpose.
The idea for this goes back to an exchange of emails, if you recall.
I know I’ve said this before (probably many times), but I think now this is my favorite of all your poems. Just like the potting wheel, sometimes He keeps us in the furnace until “just the right moment.” You are amazing (I know, I know–I’ve said that before too, but you are!)
Oh yes, the refinery. I’ll call that one “Melting.”
Thank you, Sandra. This one is not my favorite so I am encouraged to know you like it so much.
Love this one, Linnea. I was delightfully surprised at the end.
Thank you, Peggi.
I loved this Linnea, wasn’t sure where you were going at first and then I recognized the potter was God. Boy, I wishHe’d work faster on me–I getting tired of being so dizzy. I have to nag you again, start sorting these into your upcoming book of poetry!!
Love you!
micki
Thank you, Micki. I am working on that book of poetry. With all this encouragement, I had better!
What a pleasant surprise at the end!
Glad you liked the ending, Len. Thank you.
Sweet Linneann,
The time has come to stop spinning. You have your hard times looking accomplished, God has your hand and has taken you in this awesome direction. I am so excited to own your first book so let’s find a way. It will be a treasure from God and His beloved Linneann.
Thank you, Rosemary. You are such a sweetheart. I am excited too but it will take some time.
Spinning or not, timing is the Master’s to decide. But oh the finished work will be beautiful. Of that we can be sure. Beautiful way with words, Linneann. He has given you a gift.
Thank you, Gracie. He has certainly given me a desire.
Your gift amazes me again and again Linnea. It’s a very thoughtful and still emotional poem for me. I love it!!
Thank you so much, Raani.
You completely 0-U-T-D-I-D yourself on this one! When I got the picture with your words, it truly grabbed my soul! Loved it! God Bless, SR
Thank you, SR!!!! I wasn’t so sure about this one so your reaction means a lot!
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Hi,
I love the book of Jeremiah and especially the verses with Jeremiah at the potter’s and the potter spinning the vase. Your poem reflects the patience of a loving God who will never give up on us and always want to show us at our best through his loving hands.
Thank you.
Ciao,
Patricia